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part 1: Night watch
Monica Dawson NEW ORLEANS
"Someone help me please!” a woman shouted, A shadowed figure looked down from the building she was standing on and she saw a young woman around the age of 19 or 20 then she looked behind the woman and 3 Men were chasing her and one had a small pocket knife. So the figure used a form of parkour to get down the building in nearly 15 seconds.
2 of the men grabbed the woman’s arm and pinned her against wall then the man with the knife began to cut her shirt with his knife then he prepared to kiss her in her mouth but before his lips made contact a fist punched him in his jaw losing his teeth and causing him to hit the ground hard before the other men could react 1 was round house kicked and he fell on the floor knocked out then the woman ran.
The other 2 men looked at the figure and would tell it was a girl the man picked his knife up and said "she hits like a men" the other man threw a fast jab at her but she dogged it and hit the man with a three peace then kneed him in his testicles causing him to fall to his knees. the second man rushed her with his knife but she grabbed his rist and neck and she used his momentum to slam his head into the wall and he was down for the count.

Monica used her parkour skills to get a quick path home when something on her leg vibrating ,it was her cell phone she stopped and sat on a roof top then answered her phone.
"Yes Micah?"
"Om Nana just wanted me to
tell you to bring some milk on your way back
from where ever you were going "
"ok well I will don’t stay up to late” Monica said
" ok Monica oh yeah by the way you might want
to take a short cut through Cleveland street then jump
on Stanford it'll take you straight home"

Monica almost dropped her phone when he gave her a quicker route
to home
"how'd you know where i was "Monica asked
"I can talk to machines member" Micah asked
Monica breathed hard into her phone and said
" we'll talk when i get home"

[15 minutes later]

Monica walked into the house and saw Micah sitting on the couch staring at his cell phone
"Micah!" Monica said to get his attention
Micah turned and smiled at Monica then said
"oh hi St...
but before Micah could finish what he was saying
Monica thumped him in his forehead Micah then pointed out the door and said
"outside"
When Micah and her cousin went outside they began top talk

"So what now your spying on me I’m grown Micah you cant keep track
of where I’m going" Monica hissed
Micah looked at his feet then back at Monica and said "I been knowing
what you’ve been up too I’ve just been using the satellites to make sure your safe
plus I don’t understand what the big deal is."
Monica started not to know why she was mad herself so then she
made an excuse to make herself not feel so clueless.
"Micah I just don’t want you in any danger."
Monica said. Micah stared at Monica
then said "I’m at home with my phone your in way more danger than me
besides I can be like your side kick."

Monica rolled her eyes and looked at Micah "ok you can help me out from time to time
but promise you'll stay out of danger" Monica begged
"pinky promise” Micah said wrapping his finger around Monica's.
To Be Continued

2 weeks Later

Monica ran then jumped as far as she could then rolled when she hit the ground she could see the criminal
preparing to go down the fir escape but Monica was at arms length, she grabbed the mans shoulder and round house kicked him when the man fell he dropped a family dollar bag full of 20 dollar bills.
Monica began to speak into her COM link
"Micah get the police down her ASAP"
"I’m 2 steps ahead of you but you might want to get out off there they're only 4 blocks away"
Monica suddenly was able to see lights from not to far away. She sprinted to the other side and jumped off she grabbed on to the edge of building then kicked off to the other building, then grabbed a latter then slid down to the ground.
"Micah you work wonders kid"
"[color="#008000"][/color]" Anything I can do to help St.Joan.

1 Months later
All that happened in graphic novel


3 hour later
Monica opened her eyes and it appeared as if she was on a crashed plane she did what she saw every one else doing and she was about to jump out of the plane when she saw her Grandmother better known as Nana.
"Nana!"
Monica ran over to Nana and lifted her up Monica and her nana escaped the plane moments before a missile hit it and the plane exploded.


45 years ago

"Nicole if you don’t get yo narrow behind in here i know something"
Nana walked into a small room where her mother was holding a switch
"I heard you been acting a fool in that school of yours done told you bout that"
"but mama please I didn’t do anything"
Nicole was 15 years old still getting wupens and still lien to get out of em
but other things in her life were going on she thought it was just cowincidence
at first but she was realizing she could literally force emotions into other people.
Nicole got her first boy friend like that but it also got her other places like a camp
for people with special abilities profoundly coyote sands

To Be Continued
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Part 2 1961

Nicole got off a bus full of people she didn’t know and most of them were white and maybe 2 or 3 were black
but for the most part she felt alone she talked to know one and didn’t care to share information with the adults
unless she had to. Nicole was sleep when she heard footsteps outside her door she looked outside it was 4 young evolved humans like herself Charles looked at her and she looked at him, He was a handsome young man to her but she knew his game
"He like them white girls I ain’t gotta chance" she said to her self as she laid her head back down to her pillow about an hour later she was awaken boy a strong gust of wind that blew her door down followed by a man that fell into her cabin. He got up a pointed the gun at Nana she put her hands outwards then a yellow dust came from her hands and flew towards the man, he begun to cry then placed the gun to his head and pulled the trigger. Nicole got out of her bed and ran as fast as she could using her powers to make it easier for herself to get past she soon was near a diner
and she feel to her knees weak from running
"Nicole what are you doing here"
Nicole looked up and saw Charles with Angela Bob and Daniel
Nicole began to cry "every one is dead they start shooting everyone we fought back but… but"
Angela jumped in front of Charles "my sister what about my sister"
"I’m sorry" Nicole said hugging Angela"

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Part 3 RUN!
Monica used some skills she learnt to climb up a tree and she used binoculars to spot a highway that appeared to be at least 2 miles away. Monica jumped down and walked over to her grandmother and told her what she had discovered.
Nana looked at Monica and wiped her hair out of her face then said” we best to hurry then"
But before they could start walking a ball of blue fire crashed in front of them then a bald white man with a country accent came up out of the bushes ya’ll tell me were we are now but before they could reply he shoot a blast of the blue fire again Nana ran but Monica's reflexes kicked in and she charged after Flint he launched 3 fire balls at her and she did a series of cartwheels dogging all of the blast when she got near the Man thee did a right jab at him and he stumbled, then she kicked him in his stomach then she grabbed his head and brought it to his head then the man was out cold.
"Monica when did you earn how to do that" Nana said with a large smile on her face
"well Nana i didn’t want to tell any one but over the past year strange things have start happening to me the first time was with that tomato rose thing i saw you doing, I saw it and then i could do the exact same thing, then I copied different, more complicated things like the things you just saw me do back there"
Nana smiled then simply said "I knew the gene wouldn’t skip all the generations to come"
Monica looked at Nana wondering what she meant by what she said.
To be continued

As Monica and Nana walked through the area Nana told Monica about there family
"your grate aunt and I were blessed with abilities but the generation before us not a soul
could do anything other than cook but my mother told me that my granddaddy had powers
you know Monica, your granddaddy had powers to."
Monica looked and Nana and asked "so every other generation there’s people with powers?"
"exactly" Nana answered
"So. Do you have any?" Monica asked
Nana put her hand out and a yellow dust formed above it
"This yellow gas right here can make any one fell however i want them happy, sad, sleepy, hyper, anything"
all Monica could say was wow when suddenly 2 darts hit Nana in her back, Monica grabbed Nana and gently laid her on the ground then she saw 4 men with guns then one of them mad a horrible mistake he got to close then Monica grabbed the gun and held him in front of her in a chock hold. One of the other guards shoot a dart a her but Monica was to fast she spun her body around the guard she was holding and flipped him over her back onto the ground the she kicked the 2nd guar in the throat, then Monica grabbed both of the remaining guards heads and collided them together Monica ran over to Nana and removed the darts, she was barely conscious but they had no time to stay still. Monica lifted the woman up on her arms and began to walk down a hill a few minutes later they reached a highway and Monica saw a car coming down the road. She waved her hands in the air and the car pulled over in front of her as the window rolled down a tranquilizer dart flew out but Monica grabbed it unfortunately a second dart hit Monica in her shoulder and she tumbled to the ground on her knees for a moment then she collapsed.
To Be Continued

Monica slowly opened her eyes and she saw a mean looking man on the other side of the table also a guard in the left corner behind her and another in the right corner in front of her.
"My name is Danko that’s all you need to know and i need you to tell me some things” The man said
"I really don’t care what you need to know where am I !" Monica demanded
Danko rested his chin on the back of his hands that were crossed
"where is Micah?" Danko asked
"I thought he was on the plane with me" Monica lied
Danko seamed to be loosing his temper and horribly hiding it
"Listen Miss Dawson I'm not here to play games I’m going to ask you one more time where is Micah!"
Monica chuckled and then looked at the guards then said "I ...don’t... know'
as soon as she said that Monica used a double jointed move to flip over the chair and get her hands in front of her then she grabbed the chair and tossed it at the guard behind her before he could pull out a weapon. Danko was attempting to move but Monica flipped the table over on him she then rushed the other guard stole the keys from him and slammed his head into a wall. Monica then ran as fast as she could while taking her handcuffs off then a guard stood in front of her in the hallway but Monica ran horizontally across the wall to avoid him, then she forcefully threw the handcuffs at the back of his head. Monica continued to run when over 5 guards were in her way but they seamed not to have guns on them One of them charged at Monica with a botan but Monica swept him of his feet with her leg when he hit the floor Monica took the weapon from him and ran at the other guards in over 30 seconds Monica had them all on there knees or out cold Monica opened a door that was a stairwell then guars came out doors below and on top of her Monica's body then took over. She jumped over the rail and free felled at least 4 stories when she grabbed the rail and swung herself to the level below. When Monica exited the door she saw a door that said exit and no one else was in the room she made a run for it when Danko appeared in front of her a he Threw his right arm at her but Monica twisted out of the way then he did a couple of fast jabs at her but Monica blocked them with her arms, then she used a boxing move she learned, she swung her arm wide and her fist made contact with Danko's cheek and he stumbled. Monica attempted to run again but Danko grabbed her arm and put it behind her back and he grabbed her neck and tried to rush her into the wall but Monica climbed up the wall with her feet and flipped behind Danko then she chopped him in the back of his neck and he fell unconscious. Monica continued to run out of the Door when tow guards holding cannon looking weapon pulled the trigger and a net came out and wrapped itself around Monica. Danko picked himself up and then shouted
"take her back to her cell NOW!" then men grabbed the nets ends and dragged her back to the elevator Monica looked at a computer screen when she was being dragged back and when she looked at it word appeared that wrote
[STAY PUT ST.JOANS REBEL IS COMING TO HELP] Monica whispered to her self "Micah!"

TO BE CONTINUED

Part 5

As Monica was waking up for the second time she noticed something different she looked at the texture of the walls and could tell that it wasn’t the same as before instead of being sheet rock the walls were pure thick stone Monica sat up and two robots were in front of her cell and in the middle of the 2 was Danko with a scowl
"listen up Monica if you try to escape I grantee you, you will be shoot in your forehead by one of these machines here"
Then he walked away and soon Monica was alone.
2 months had passed she was constantly thinking of ways to escape, if Micah knew where she was, and if so how much of a danger would it be for him to try and rescue her. Monica stayed in shape by mimicking some exercise videos, she observed the machines movements noticed that they weren’t stiff but had fluid body movements.


One day she also noticed that one of the robots eyes continued to flash green then suddenly its left hand turned into a gun and then it shot the other robot in the head and it feel to the ground then she looked at it oddly then said
"Micah!"
the robot shook its head then opened the door then Monica and her robotic cousin ran down the hallway Micah cut a turn were a cabinet was Micah opened it and a arsenal of weapons were inside he threw Monica two guns and Monica grabbed a knife and cut her pants to make them fit for running they were slightly aver here knees now then she said
"lets go"
They continued to a path down the hallway then 5 robots appeared down the hall then they began to shoot at Monica ,but Micah jumped in front of her and the bullets snuck deep into its metal body then the robot feel motionless Monica jumped of the wall into a large vent then a small robotic spider about the size of a Q-ball then a voice came out of it
"Monica its Micah I’m going to probe another one of the robots just hang on the Spider crawled down the vent then jumped onto a robots back then its arms became sharp then they impelled the robot then its eyes turned green like the other the robot turned in a 360 degrease circle shooting causing all the other 4 robots to fall. Monica hoped down from the vent and they continued to run down the hallway. Monica continued to run as she talked

"so Micah when you make that little spider thing?" Monica asked
Micahs voice sounded a bit diffrent but understandable
"I used some spare parts out of a junck yard and a abonded warehouse" Micah said befor makng a shap turn

Monica looked back and she saw two robots behind them she acted before they did she turned on her heel and began to shoot with pinpoint accuracy the robots feel back then monica continued to run. then for somereason micah slowed down to a complet stop then he picked Monica up and then he jumped out of the window Monica screamed very loud when the spider jumped of the robot and it became motionless. Monica screamed as she toumbled to the ground and before she hit it Wes flew up under her and grabed her. MOnica felt tears roll down her face and then she hugged Wes.

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THE COMPANY ARC
A few months later being hunted was over Monica could relax now she been reshaped in her experience she was stronger than before and now protecting New orleans was the good her powers would be dooing for now on..... or atleast thats what she thought.



Begemot Geroi
A beta-reader. You need one desperately.
dboe24
QUOTE (Begemot Geroi @ Jun 10 2009, 03:15 PM) *
A beta-reader. You need one desperately.


sounds bad is the story that horriable
Begemot Geroi
QUOTE (dboe24 @ Jun 10 2009, 11:25 PM) *
sounds bad is the story that horriable

Yes.
dboe24
QUOTE (Begemot Geroi @ Jun 11 2009, 08:27 AM) *
Yes.

hm oh weel i aint tryin to impress mobody so it'll be alrite
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